thom175

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Only a couple of people know the truth. Am I one of them?

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thom175

For zerogeass and chassi93

Posted by thom175 Nov. 9, 2009 @ 9:57 PM EST

This story that I'm writing is pretty long that it might be a full length novel. Here's a sneak peek for you 2 and anyone else who wants to know. Here's a little exerpt from chapter 5.

5
Demon Hunters

Why is the human life form so difficult to understand? They fight, they kill, they want peace, etc, etc. "Alright. You're coming with me," I reply, "But if you give me just the tiniest type of wrong information, I will do something that is worst than dying." John laughs and says, "That's impossible." I ask him why. His answer? "I'm already living it." Guys got spunk. I smile and replied, "No you're not." He looks at me with an expression of shock and fear. Everyone seems to be afraid of me. Even family. "Alright," I say, "Let's go." "How?" I laugh at his questtion.they all look at me like I'm crazy. Maybe I am, maybe I'm not. Who's to tell? One guy walks up to John and says, "Are you sure about this is a good idea man? I mean for all we know it's a very powerful demon." "Listen," John tells the man, "I know what it looks like, but he can't be. I Know where good ol' Bill is because he told about this here war. I didn't believe him, but then again, I never believed in angels and demons either. I know he's no demon because Bill tried to kill Death one time. That made me question his sanity at one point, but... well, look at our business Lenny." The man known as Lenny then said, " Alright Johnny. Be caruful man." "Don't worry. I will be." After that, he(john) walked up to me and asked, "So, which road should we take?" I smile and answer, "My road." Once again a blackish blue haze surrounds my companion and me and then we find ourselves in what I thought was Miami. Turned out we were in Cuba. I see a group of peopleand I start to walk to them when a hand grabs my arm. I turn around to see Johnnypointing yo two people walking on the sand. One of them I know is Billy but the other I couldn't tell. Not from this distance. As John and I keep walking, we also notice that Bill's companion is holding a knife. Finally we are close enough to see him and I recognize him in an instant. "Death! How good it is to see you again!" "Same to you Raphael," I answer back.

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Nov. 9, 2009 | 10:03 PM zerogeass says:

hmm, interesting.

although my first point of advice. every time a new charactor speaks it's a new paragraph, not only is it gramaticly correct, but it helps keep it organized.

still, very good.

Nov. 9, 2009 | 10:15 PM thom175 responds:

I know I know. I was hurried to write this. Thanks though for your opinion.

Updated: Nov. 10, 2009, 2:57 PM

Nov. 9, 2009 | 10:49 PM thespammer says:

Human sexuality is how people experience the erotic and express themselves as sexual beings. Frequently driven by the desire for sexual pleasure, human sexuality has biological, physical and emotional aspects. Biologically, it refers to the reproductive mechanism as well as the basic biological drive that exists in all species and can encompass sexual intercourse and sexual contact in all its forms. Emotional aspects deal with the intense emotions relating to sexual acts and associated social bonds. Physical issues around sexuality range from purely medical considerations to concerns about the physiological or even psychological and sociological aspects of sexual behaviour.

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